Sunday, February 1, 2009

blog prompt3

in my opinion, age matters quite much. If we are old, our joint will not worked so smoothly as before and we will not ran as fast as when we are young. It is like a car, when cars get old, it becomes more noisy and need a greater amount of fuel to get it moving. we are exactly the samr as the car. But we are also quite different from the car, for the car, it get dumped as it get old, we will only learn the experenice of it, and to this point, old is actually not a bad thing.

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  1. Wonderful! But watch out for sentence construction

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  3. I agree that age is not a bad thing. With age comes expeirence. Since expeirence is not a good, the same goes for age.
    P.S you got to watch your language. There are quite a number of those errors in your posts

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  5. It's a pretty comprehensive post, and you elaborated on many points, giving specific examples

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